Here is an ad which has a problem with the words in the copy. There are small mistakes in spacing "ખાંસી ના" and a full stop without completing a sentence (ideally there should be a word "છે" after the word આપે.
But a bigger mistake is where the word "આ" which means "This" has been put. It could have been avoided else it gives a wrong connotation. If you read the sentence along with this word and a comma which has been put it could also mean as if the product is a headache! "આ માથાનો દુખાવો,"
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Nikhil
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